SORRY I KILLED YOUR DADDY

SORRY I KILLED YOUR DADDY

A Poem by Kieran Mason
"

The reality of war

"
I went to war at the age of 22
Not sure of what I was going to do 
Kill or be killed my sergeant said 
And I didn't want to end up by being dead 
Sorry I killed your daddy 
My 23rd birthday and I was given a gun 
Kill the enemy or be killed my son 
So I was left with no choice but to kill 
As my fellow comrades and I went over that hill 
Sorry I killed your daddy
Your daddy was in the same position as me I'm sure 
Not a pleasant way to die at the age of 24
Little child please don't weep
As you settle off to sleep 
Sorry I killed your daddy

© 2017 Kieran Mason


My Review

Would you like to review this Poem?
Login | Register




Reviews

Wow - I havent been to war but I've seen war. The soldiers talked like this to us as kids - we never understood.
I couldnt help but wonder how much more striking this would be with a gory/graphic description of a close combat death - to imply the soldier is suffering not only guilt but PTSD.

Posted 7 Years Ago



Share This
Email
Facebook
Twitter
Request Read Request
Add to Library My Library
Subscribe Subscribe


Stats

136 Views
1 Review
Rating
Added on September 16, 2017
Last Updated on September 16, 2017
Tags: War

Author

Kieran Mason
Kieran Mason

Norwich , United Kingdom



About
I am waiting patiently for my poems to be discovered. ..poems for everyday life for all walks of life more..

Writing