Lets take advantage of this limited time

Ill be gone tomorrow but im here today
letz take advantage, i aint here to stay
words cant express why i feel this way
needless to say
lean on me and fade away
i was there from sunrise til dawn
but im moving on
two ounces in my cup, im gone
trying to forget the pain ive caused
take your heart back from me
your free
and im sorry but i just cant be what you want me to be
i said it before, cant you see??
and once again karma will repay me
heart broken by a breezy breezy baby
or another jazzy lady
and i know this sounds crazy
but im movin on to bigger and better things, and i might just get lucky
and turn this guitar into money
drinkin whiskey gettin tipsy
upgraded lookin spiffy
poppin pills is a habbit
lighting squares up with this match stick

Reviews

[HopelesslyDevoted]

i like this! this could make a good song!

[chillz]

0_0 AMAZING! THE FLOW WAS EPIC ...GREAT JOB!

[nighttimesnoozer]

in my head i gave it a hip hop beat not that gay new hip hop stuff but old school hip hop as i read and this is really good i think your a better writer then ! m!~! O_O