Fear

Fear

A Poem by Kibbs Fortilus



January 6, 2012

Courage is not the absence of fear; it is acting in spite of it
-         Mark Twain

The paradox of fear: It is either the catalyst for success or the trip wire for failure
-         Anonymous

Fear

I'm afraid to make a move, okay
Don't think it's cause I'm scared
Well, I am in a different way
It's just the way you stare

You look confused
Am I being confusing?
I'll try to make this clear
It’s just that I…
Well, times a losing
…Must get over fear…

Okay, here's the big news
I like you so very much
Is it odd that I love you so?
Do you feel as such?

I’ll walk away. I'm sorry…
I hope this isn't strange
It's just so hard to keep this in
This bottled is such pain

Are you looking for a happy ending?
As you continue to read this poem.
She tells me we're just "not that way"
And I walk on home alone….

           --- K.S. Fort 


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I like the use of narrators voice in this poem, it makes it feel real. I can definitely relate to this fear. Very good! Thank you for posting.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kibbs Fortilus

7 Years Ago

Thank you very much for reading. I greatly appreciate it.
the poem was a little odd but then again anyone that is scared will act odd so really this poem is really good

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Kibbs Fortilus

7 Years Ago

Yes, I really wanted to construct it this way. I think about the nerves I felt before spilling my gu.. read more
jason new

7 Years Ago

ouch well it might stink that she turned you down but at least you had the guts to say it be proud, .. read more
Kibbs Fortilus

7 Years Ago

Good point :)

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