Loyalty

To be loyal, is to love with all your heart and soul, fulfilling each others happiness, tis the true goal~

As the nights pass by,

I miss you more and more.

My love for you,

Deeper than the ocean floor.

A love so strong,

Pure and true.

For when we are apart,

That's when I really miss you.

Tell me you love me,

Show me the way.

I'll make your life complete,

By the end of each day.

With a passion so strong,

I'll be loyal and true.

Keep me by your side,

Cause I need you.

Share with me your love,

I will show you the way.

Let not your heart weep,

For I will never stray.

Reviews

[Ravyne Hawke]

Lovely poem of expressed love. Nice rhyme and flow.

[Kiba Shadowpaw]

Thank you, i know it's a bit cliche, but my freestyle poetry doesn't turn out as well as my rhythmical verses.