My pain

I am shattered.

Shattered as a glass that was knocked to

The cruel floor.

My heart is unmoving.

Unmoving like a stone.

I am empty.

Empty as a hollowed tree.

I am aching.

Aching like that of a branch over burdened with fruit.

I am lonely.

Lonely as a wolf who has lost their mate.

Reviews

[Tina Kline]

Impressive. The extreme emotional pain comes through in a powerful way. Very dark and tragic. I've walked in this place from time to time. You're a very skillful and creative writer! You have lots of talent!! :)