I surrender

 Vallitto, Vallitoe, Niff, The Fallen

hear my plea and forgive me

 im sorry i love thee

strike my flesh bring my death again and again

 but i truly see thee

by and by you find me destroy me

 so now i bow to thee and raise my hands in despair and surrender to ye in body and in mind

 now command me

Reviews

[Mockingbird]

must be amazing to be so much in love, to surrender your body and mind...what a spell he's cast over thee. it actually has very sensual language. edgy and racy. i definitely would beg his infernal majesty to strike my flesh many times and bring me to death over and over. excellent poem.

[Allen Smuckler]

I think he already has....
short...powerful...and heartfelt..
Amazing what the power of love can cause us to say .... and do...
Wonderful write Kiari
allen

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

beautiful poem, perhaps I don't have a full grasp of the old language but I am thinking this should be thee instead of thy, let me know if I am incorrect.

[Mark]

Wow, sweet surrender eh?