What do i need?

I need you to hold me tight.

I need you to come back to me.

I need you to no longer strike in anger.

I need you to caress my check as before.

I need you to remove the blade from my flesh.

I need you to forgive me as I have forgiven you.

I need to be able to look you in the eyes without fearing you.

I need you my fallen… my Niff my Vallitto my Vallitoe….

I need you love.

I need my fate and the worlds, even if you need me no more.

Reviews

[Mockingbird]

i feel a sense of despair and desperation. the girl having been forsaken by her love. they must have had a tumultuous relationship as he caresses her but strikes in anger. when you love the person you will forgive them no matter what. however it sounds like she will go on with her life without him if he must. excellent poem.

[MusicLover]

Many people feel like this. They could need help but they can not ask. I love this

[Heromen Selena]

In the fourth line I think "me" should be "my", but other than that it's really good. :)