What do i need?

I need you to hold me tight.

I need you to come back to me.

I need you to no longer strike in anger.

I need you to caress my check as before.

I need you to remove the blade from my flesh.

I need you to forgive me as I have forgiven you.

I need to be able to look you in the eyes without fearing you.

I need you my fallen… my Niff my Vallitto my Vallitoe….

I need you love.

I need my fate and the worlds, even if you need me no more.

Reviews

[Mockingbird]

i feel a sense of despair and desperation. the girl having been forsaken by her love. they must have had a tumultuous relationship as he caresses her but strikes in anger. when you love the person you will forgive them no matter what. however it sounds like she will go on with her life without him if he must. excellent poem.

[CHRIS ANDES]

it really enjoys me to read love poems right now
=]

[Jeremy Baker]

nicely written

[Dr Ayaz chandio]

nice write..shows the depth of feeling and love..thanks.

[dontwakeme]

I love this poem. I love the begining of the 'I need' s. It creates unity in the peice.

[Grace Catherine C.]

Really great poem, such longing and emotion, it's beautifull really.
Also- Is that Grell Sutcliffe from Black Butler as your picture?

[Sasha]

Sad, powerful, emotional, strong...there are too many adjectives to name. But it is a great poem. Great job.

[Coyote Poetry]

Powerful expression of emotion and need. I like the repetition. Made the poem stronger. A very good ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[mariah]

a beautiful, powerful poem about relationships :) good job
-mariah

[shadow night]

sad i know who and what your talking about. i like it its a great poem it goes togather pretty quickly but for some reason when i read it i dont see it like almoste every poem i read 98% of them i see as if they was a tv show or being acted out but idk why not this one. but i do like it i get wheree your coming from well done

[MusicLover]

sorry forgot the 100/100