the end of me

im a shadow in the mist
a fragment of myself
broken and alone
my flesh is pressed to stone
and my heart is peirced with bone
my mind is wavered and fogged
my soul is tarnished faded
with my enemy i was fated
with azreal i have dated
in sin i have bathed
but in blessing by the gods i am fitted
my death will be quick and sweet
as by soul pools with my blood
and everything i ever hated
bitter tears will not shed
friends will forget
love was never here
lies was all that was ever knitted

Reviews

[MusicLover]

i love the way you describe the emotions. i have always wanted it to be so clean and in the smae style as yours to. Keep up the good work

[Leslie Philibert]

Honest, reflective poem with some fine lines, liked especially the eleventh line, good writing.