half never ending love

Strigoi of fire and bone.

O how i love thy tone

it hums through and apon the air.

Eyes that shine even when from the light

can frezze me or melt me.

O how i fear and love thy.

Now i beg thy forget me not

love me ever and never

Reviews

[Jack Isaac]

The eyes say it all, everytime, and never. These are the most all-encompassing eyes, the kind that take the bad with the good, the kind that shine in light or in dark, the kind that say it all in "love me ever and never". For of what use are eyes that reject the bad, the darkness, and the never love? Only true eyes see it all, and only true love lives behind such eyes. This is the kind of poem that always needs to be said. Nice work.

[Michael X]

the title and the ending come together and create a balance - never and ever, classic syntax, for what is begged for is also the greatest of fears,
such is the darker shades of romance, and love that leaves the heart
in pain, you have a great way of expressing clarity and simplicity, keep it up!