ill never give up

i call for your aid

earth make me strong

air give me wisdom

fire give me determination

water guide my soul

spirit give me focus

nothing

they dont heed my call

laughter swirls around me

youll never make it lil one

you should jus give up

you dumb a*s b***h you will always fail

.......cut me down try a little harder

ill never quit

ill never give up

ill never do as you say

{slice my hand ball it into a fist let the blood fall to the ground}

i swear apon my blood and life ill never quit

*whisper* "mother and father above heed my plea

i know im not worthy but please find it in your heart to help me"

 earth make me strong

the sent of wet grass and wild flowers fill the air

air give me wisdom

the wind wips around me and the thoughts of the old and new fill me

fire give me determination

the air warms around me and i am braver then ever befor

water guid my soul

the smell of the sea greats me i know the steps i must take

spirit give me focus

my mind calms

joy feels my heart and energy flows from my finger tips

i center myself one last time

ajilv

fire shoots from hand

the ground is in a blaze with licking flames that go or stay where i wish

my vision is of 2

one from where i stand and the other snaking through the flame

i clasp my hand shut and the fire dies 

i fall to my knees apon soft moss

green energy flows over me i feel at peace

*whisper* thank you mother and father above

a single tear falls from my eye as the words of the Goddess sing in my head

"i heed your plea child of the wild

your are never far from my sight

my ears are open to you as well as my heart

now blessed be you and your path my child"

slowly the elements fade

each with a goodbye

all but earth that stays untile the tears no longer flood my eyes

as i stand to leave at my feet is a gem

an always moving color and feel 

red-warm

blue-cool

green-soft

gold-weightless

purple-peacefull

and last white-everything at once and a flood of are mothers love

*whisper*thank you 

 

Reviews

[Kiari Sabon]

ill read it and thanks 2 all

[Lucy]

That was great! You are getting so much better at formatting your poems as well, which really helps a lot.

[Larry Dyson]

beautiful NA prayer and story...the "scent "of wet grass ...now please read mYsustainer prose please?

[London]

nicely done

[NeonWolves]

Your getting better at grammer and spelling. Nice. I'd just clean it up a bit and make it easier to read. Instead of putting in rp style with the * It would probobly be easier to just say "I whisper" to make it easier for people who aren't familiar.

[DontBlink158]

that was really powerful, i really liked it. You showed great dicription of the elements, great job.