set me free

let me loss of your bond warrior of the Goddess

let me loss on the plains to find ur enamys and mine

with teeth and claws of a beast and when i have over come...

i will dance under the moons light in there souls blood

Reviews

[Kiari Sabon]

ill fix it when i can

[Mickeyboi]

I like this poem but some of the spelling errors and grammatical errors are distracting, don't get me wrong I am no grammar / spelling nazi but think if you checked over would improve the experience for the reader.
Mike