im broken so i turn to u

my soul is broken into 2

my mind is in a haz

a lone tear slips from my eye

i am lost in thought

dont know what to do or where to go

so i call for you

to you

help me

save me

pick me up soul and mind

open your arms

let me melt from your touch

your the only one that cares

its wrong to do

ill be lost forever

but i turn to you

Basilis

i dont give you my soul

i dont give you my full heart

you are imortal

but you dont have my full heart

you know it has been given to three

you know it cant be changed

but do you take me

Reviews

[Akemi Polino]

i like this. Its strong! your a very talented poet

[ImagineItAll]

I love this. I can feel the emotion coming from your words. Well done!

[Kiari Sabon]

thanks and yeah i need to work on it

[Strike the Wolf]

Nice job, slightly confused as to whom the projected audience was supposed ta be an slightyl confused on subject matter but other an at great job kiari

[Roze Collions]

odd and needy