*blood thirsty blade
A Poem by
Kiari Sabon
Give me your rubies.
Give me your life.
Give me all you need.
Give me all you love.
Give me sip.
Give me a taste.
Give it all.
© 2011 Kiari Sabon
Reviews
The flow is very sharp, which goes great with this piece. "give me a sip give me a taste" are great.
Posted 12 Years Ago
I aint' sleeping tonight... Great piece though
Posted 12 Years Ago
I aint' sleeping tonight... Great piece though
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
if ur going to do it why dont u ur always writing about it why havent you done it
Posted 13 Years Ago
if ur going to do it why dont u ur always writing about it why havent you done it
sounds a little needy girl. . . .maybe thats why and an answear to a question of yours??????????????? its ok again i like the format
Posted 13 Years Ago
sounds a little needy girl. . . .maybe thats why and an answear to a question of yours??????????????? its ok again i like the format
2 of 2 people found this review constructive.
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Added on May 23, 2011
Last Updated on May 23, 2011
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Kiari Sabon morehead, KY
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Im broken its as simple as that but it seems all writers have seen the darkest and brightest moments being able to capture the hearts of so many. I can't bring myself to talk to those i should but whe..
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