a new love

a new love

A Poem by Kiari Sabon

Our hearts beat in time.

Our words even rhyme.

Our height is the same.

Our life line intertwines.

Our birth line is the same.

Our death mark is the same.

Our  love will always be the same.

© 2012 Kiari Sabon


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my bad i was half asleep when i made this

Posted 13 Years Ago
I think you mean "our" instead of "are" because it would make a lot more sense.
But the actually concept and such is good.

Posted 13 Years Ago


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Kiari Sabon
Kiari Sabon

morehead, KY



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