The end

It hurts and I can’t stand

I fell for your web of lies and trap of hidden eyes

You filled me with a cold passion and left me burning raw and empty inside

Your cruelty dug in like the roots of an olden tree

Ripping out the soil of my soul as I uprooted them

Why did you plant this spell

It’s worse than hell

Does it please you to see me fall upon my knees

Can’t you see the scars already there

Life has already brought me down countless times

Does making my wounds mend yours

Tears of my blood stain my cheeks

You whipped them away picking me up but now I see it was only to place me on a higher ledge

As I fell I couldn’t tell

Only when I hit the hardened ground did I see

You have broken me

Everything is numb like that of flesh exposed to the chill of winter

Love is no longer there the word just haunts the air

What I do feel is hurt empty and broken

This is the end I can’t pick up the remaining shards of my being…

This is the end…

Farewell

 

Reviews

[RedInk524]

I gave up long ago looking for love, I just wait for it to find me. And even then I am cautious. Because the closer you let someone come to you, the deeper they can stab. So you have to trust yourself in deciding who to trust. Very few take love seriously these days, and fewer actually stick with it.

[Kiari Sabon]

i actually kinda needed this i think i just got myself into this kind of situation again... unfortunately i love to easily and anymore all i seem to find are those who con their way into you trusting them... i'm about to give up on love..

[RedInk524]

Im not gonna be a hypocrite and say completely shut yourself out, I said I would do the same but ended up with another gf. lol. Just be more cautious and be sure you want to trust that person. It is like gambling.

[Kiari Sabon]

Kay i will and thank you

[CHRIS ANDES]

so sad =/
good write

[Kiari Sabon]

thank you

[Heromen Selena]

Powerful write. Very emotional. It has moved me. Excellent job :)

[Kiari Sabon]

thank you :}

[Fréyjä Helv..]

Pure and powerful emotions of desperation. I feel your plea. I feel sympathy. This touched me. beautiful write.

[Kiari Sabon]

thank you it means a lot

[quarintine_deathangel]

Does it pleas you to see me fall pleas should be please
This sounds pretty harsh, I hope you get over it. I wrote Merci de mi and no name off of an event similar to this feeling and emotion. This is a relateable write. Thanx for writing! ^.

[Kiari Sabon]

kay thank you ill fix it asap :}

[Tina Kline]

Very raw and painful and emotions sure can be. It's hard to pick oneself up and continue on from this shattering events in life but it can be done. An outstanding poem!

[Kiari Sabon]

thank you :}

[Castonovia]

Raw emotions fill this lyrical piece of broken hearts and no tomorrow, hard to mend and heal, even harder to pick yourself back up to face the day... very lovely yet oh so sad poem from the heart and soul, well penned indeed :)

[Kiari Sabon]

thank you

[Castonovia]

My pleasure :)

[Mark]

Broken hearts hurt. But not forever. The pain in this poetry is evident.

[Kiari Sabon]

thank you

[G!o]

broken but beautiful piece filled with deep emotion of pain. Love can really suck at times...anyway you've really penned that down here with some really amazing lines. Good writing.

[Kiari Sabon]

thank you

[Pax]

"Love is no longer there the word just haunts the air"
~ its packed with powerful dark emotions which is brilliant.. I'm always amaze with your darkly emotional poems... Brilliant work my friend...

[Kiari Sabon]

thank you