this ship is going down

This ship is going down called life
as you talk and stand around i open another bottle
things could have been different this time around
its closing in I'm gonna drowned
I'm going to drink this brandy down
I'm truly going down
the drink is the only thing that keeps me around
as the world crashes down
its the end of the world

im gonna drowned
I'm going to drink this brandy down
I'm truly going down
the drink is the only thing that keeps me around
as world crashes down
its the only heat in this world
I think ill drink another round
this ship is going down and there is no turning around
I said yes this ship is going down
I'm gonna burn in hell
might as well drink another round
my world is crashing down

Reviews

[Pax]

i like the rhyming here..just like a song...
and about the poem... its doesn't matter what you drink and drunk yourself to alcohol., it will just come back reminding you when your sober... nothing comes out of alcohol..just endless addiction to it (you become reliant to it) and head aches... and like you said its always going down crashing down...
wonderful poem...made me really think...

[Mockingbird]

shows despair and pain. it's no wonder we all have our addictions to escape. great use of repetition. it really drives in the emotion. excellent work.