falling wings

Here you go Jordan.. yeah i was waiting on you...

o    a butterfly wing falls to me
it looks so fare and beautiful but it came into existence in mid air
as he seemed to on that fateful day so long ago
he was different from the start
strong and stern but kind at heart
when i fell to the dark he scolded me and made me rise to the light
he was there for me
but does he care for me
i care for him
i would do anything for him
even if it meant my end
but i wait for a day...
no i pray for a day that he tells me he feels the same way
but will that time come
i hope so in the end
but until then ill hold my tongue and tear up my eyes
especially when if been forgotten and want him here
wish him near
but in turn I want to be there for him

Reviews

[Tina Kline]

A lovely romantic poem. Love is like magic and its all mysterious too, just like the butterfly wing you mention here. A very beautiful poem and I hope the story ends positively.

[Kiari Sabon]

thank you :)

[de_maruf]

natural writing

[de_maruf]

natural writing
i must say...

[Pax]

beautifully sad piece... there is nothing wrong to wish and be ever as hopeful as you can be.... still you have to reach for it and make it happen... if it doesn't work out then maybe it's not meant to be... and there is still someone there for you out there...

a great write!

[Kiari Sabon]

thank you it means a lot

[Chris]

If you don't reach for your stars you'll never touch them... and if you DO reach and somehow fall short or just plain miss - at least you really tried... and no one can ever fault you for that.

[Kiari Sabon]

thank you and indeed for now on i have made up my mind and i shall never sit and let the world pass me by i will reach out thank you

[Chris]

You've a lot of heart... and that really isn't a bad thing. It hurts sometimes - but man it can sing too!

[Kiari Sabon]

thank you :}

[Emily B]

i have wanted to die for a man, almost did once or twice

doesn't seem like such a good reason to end looking back on it

[Kiari Sabon]

im trying to work things out with him but im not sure what is going to happen

[Emily B]

life is too short to wait for somebody that doesn't love you back

[Kiari Sabon]

you have a point... thank you for the advice

[Larry Dyson]

submissive interjection for a master?

[Kiari Sabon]

i guess it can kinda be seen that way.. my love for him is... difficult but he is a friend

[dreaming dame]

So beautiful!

[Kiari Sabon]

thank you :)