Fox

Fox
Lying, sneaky trap,
Be careful or she can snap.
Beautiful, spontaneous cheat,
There is no use, She can't be beat.

Flirty, Girly Wretch,
Something you'll never get.
Running with no tomorrow.
She does not feel sorrow.

She hurts like Hell when you're through.
Boy, what will you do?
When that foxy girl
gets done chasing you through the world.

Author's Note

A simple revision. With a bigger impact.

Reviews

[mattavelli]

Hello, I enjoyed your poem, but I think it could flow more smoothly.

[Ki Rider]

That's very insightful. I did write this many years ago when I was just about 15. But I do hope you enjoy the new updated version of this. I believe it now runs smoother than the last.

[Neon]

Haha! Now this write makes me happy and so smiley!
I love this write even I damn enjoyed this one that's well penned into the words of yours. Lovely write!