Helplessly in love with my Almighty

Oh! The possessor of the blue throat,
You are the most elegant dancer,
A fearless warrior to note,
And the most passionate lover,
No one can love me true,
But only you.

Down to Earth, you've always been,
Slash opening my cocoon of dismay,
And letting the glad me be seen,
Yet, "I'm just a normal person," You always say,
My butterfly of elation flew,
Only because of you.

Girls pray to you patiently,
To acquire a lover like you
As you always give your devotee,
What she wants. I know, it's true,
Sunshine of every day brand new,
Is also given by none other than you.

And then, there is me praying,
And asking you, yourself, to be my lover
I'm forever chanting and saying,
"None can be like you. So, marry me!" However,
I know it can't be true,
But, I want to marry only you

I know you won't descend down for me,
And your Holy Family will seethe with anger
But I trust your protection over your devotee,
I apologize, but I need you to be my lover.
Even after every false I do,
I wish you love me too.

Reviews

[Yasmin]

Applause! :') such an emotional write!
Well done

[Khyati]

^_^ Thanksss ^_^

[stars are far]

He created us, so He loves us, and yes, when we are in the side of the almighty we are fine ...that was very great work :) keep it up :)

[Khyati]

^_^ Isn't he so desirable? lol! :)

[stars are far]

hehe yes He is

[Kasey Miriam]

I really enjoyed this poem its written very well with a brilliant choice in words. Very good job!

[Khyati]

Thanks a lot! ^_^

[Angad Waraich]

You have a religious touch in a lot of your work.
This a well penned piece i liked it.

Well done.

Thank you for sharing.
Angad

[Khyati]

Thank you so much.

[Surya pradha]

beautiful emotional poem. really liked it!

[Surya pradha]

ha ha, you're welcome.

[Khyati]

Thanks so much! :P Yup this one is a poem!

[Khyati]

^_^ Cool ;)

[Ena Lona Kendra]

I like this poem its amazing. :) please keep writing

[Khyati]

Seriously? ^_^ Oh thanks!

[Ena Lona Kendra]

Yes. :) keep writing. Don't let anyone get you down or make you lose track of yourself. Let everything out in the writing you do. and one day I hope to read your name in a book of poems.

[Khyati]

Oh! thanks! I am not very great at poems! :P I write stories better :)

[Ena Lona Kendra]

I write stories also. but mine are mostly depressing.

[Khyati]

ya, that's because of your past life.. :) It's okay. Mine are also depressing at times.,, My strategy is to write the depression that I have in myself out and then finding a solution to it... through my writing. Like, thinking what God would have told me :) he loves all of us.. right? He wants us to be happy.. :)