THE ONLY ONE EVER

THE ONLY ONE EVER

A Poem by Akshita
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When someone really does not want to be your friend!

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THE  ONLY ONE EVER

One thing you can be certain of,

Is that I am as friendly as one can be;

Rarely had fights,

Never been the one for jealousy.

 

Yet, I don’t understand,

Why that only one ever;

Let me down so badly,

Just when I reached out to her.

 

I am not affected by any of it,

For I have lots of good friends;

But somewhere in my heart,

It still hurts that she doesn’t want to be my friend.

© 2016 Akshita


Author's Note

Akshita
I know that it is not a very good poem But I couldn't help posting it.

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There isnt anything as a good poem or a bad one. These are your thoughts that have stirred your heart and have been shared with the world by the words that you have written.
When you know that you meant no bad and someone has still misunderstood you, then it really hurts deep down in the heart.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akshita

8 Years Ago

Thanks a lot for your review!



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Its way better than you Think .....

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akshita

8 Years Ago

Really!? Thanks a lot : )
all poems are good,especially if the yr`e from the heart

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akshita

8 Years Ago

I guess you're right! : )
Good work dude. Nice words loving the aim

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akshita

8 Years Ago

Thank you!
very beautiful poem, easy read. keep writing.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akshita

8 Years Ago

Thanks a lot! : )
A fun, easy read... and totally relatable! Nice stuff there :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akshita

8 Years Ago

Thanks!!! : )
Appreciable :) keep writing good stuff

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Akshita

8 Years Ago

Thanks a lot! : )

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Akshita
Akshita

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