Sorry

Like an unexpected volcano eruption
The fundamental pieces of my life burnt away
Taken away by a single act of madness
So severe it caused alot more than sadness

Sleepless night after sleepless night
Hiding away at the first sign of light
My 30 pieces of silver glistening in the sun
But my heart aching to find a rope or gun

Pride oh pride. Anger oh anger
Bitterness oh bitterness
Your hunger has devoured me
It has sent me into the abyss

I cannot save myself
Noone can save me
No treatment no religion
No friend and more foes

You have taken everything from me
Branded me as heartless and spineless
Why do you hesitate to take my life
Take it and be gone

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Amazing use of words.
"Pride oh pride. Anger oh anger
Bitterness oh bitterness
Your hunger has devoured me
It has sent me into the abyss "
I could write a epic poem from the words above. I enjoyed the complete poem. The strong statements left the reader with something to think about. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[JayDee]

The feels in this piece though...
Strikes the heart, right there. Nicely written though, reader can understand the pain experienced so well done

[katy B]

Thank you so much for reading it. I appreciate it.

[JayDee]

My greatest pleasure...
I enjoyed reading it