For my friend, Jacob, who is so much more unique than simply unique
Exuding such profound intensity that is well beyond the grasp of many....those with like souls, souls that plead to be beared from the casting of a shadow, can truly be taken in immensely, easily, swiftly.
Obscured behind a wall, a concealment, a slight shade, his presence desires to be heard but merely ever so quietly.
A near inaudible whisper, a murmur that assembles to a faint joining of words, so boldly part his lips and with it, a reflection he aims to contrive for all to hear, yet only a choice few will understand.
These intrepid words he speaks, they touch upon life and project his knowledge of one so meagerly lived, yet so tender - his soul openly recites it's progressive years.
His story, not one so easily recited, let alone lived, is a truth so valid that it cannot be misconstrued, the wisdom lines upon his brow tell of it all.
Though his presence is strongly felt in almost any dwelling, he prefers his solitude but if your attendance is precise, there stands a possibility that you too, will surely be drawn into the verses he communicates with such knowledgable eloquence.
Pretty fair n fine - seems, it's written ev'n dedicated to someone. Here's one guy, on cafe's site, named Jacob (Erin) as well, first I thought, it's written for him, perhaps, not sure about it...
.. last few lines are pretty remarkable n honoring as well. Looking forward to reading your work!
Posted 4 Years Ago
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4 Years Ago
Funny you should ever do slightly incline as to whether this one was directed to anyone you may know.. read moreFunny you should ever do slightly incline as to whether this one was directed to anyone you may know, know of or be familiar with, in perhaps this site or another bc you're actually not the 1st to question it's directive lol. I can assure you, this poem is written about a very close friend of mine who's presence in my life, has made a difference and he's nothing near a writer nor the like interest enough in so, to be on any publishing site lol. No, this one is very personal to me. Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. I hope there are many more here that pique your interest and that you enjoy reading!
LOL - sure, now you have very nicely cleared that it's not the "writer-ish" Jacob but "non-writer-is.. read moreLOL - sure, now you have very nicely cleared that it's not the "writer-ish" Jacob but "non-writer-ish" one, of course, a beloved one of yours :P
You know I also thought this was about our writer Jacob, on this site whom I know well and fits this description . All I can say is your Jacob sounds a great guy and this is a fine tribute to a friend.
Lol....well, funny everyone keeps saying that. Starting to feel like a lame not knowing him, too lol.. read moreLol....well, funny everyone keeps saying that. Starting to feel like a lame not knowing him, too lol. The Jacob to whom this refers, he’s a pretty unique guy indeed. Thank you, ma’am for reading. 😊
4 Years Ago
Our Jacob is too and he is without doubt the King of metaphors. Look out for his poetry.:)
Pretty fair n fine - seems, it's written ev'n dedicated to someone. Here's one guy, on cafe's site, named Jacob (Erin) as well, first I thought, it's written for him, perhaps, not sure about it...
.. last few lines are pretty remarkable n honoring as well. Looking forward to reading your work!
Posted 4 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
4 Years Ago
Funny you should ever do slightly incline as to whether this one was directed to anyone you may know.. read moreFunny you should ever do slightly incline as to whether this one was directed to anyone you may know, know of or be familiar with, in perhaps this site or another bc you're actually not the 1st to question it's directive lol. I can assure you, this poem is written about a very close friend of mine who's presence in my life, has made a difference and he's nothing near a writer nor the like interest enough in so, to be on any publishing site lol. No, this one is very personal to me. Thank you very much for reading and reviewing. I hope there are many more here that pique your interest and that you enjoy reading!
LOL - sure, now you have very nicely cleared that it's not the "writer-ish" Jacob but "non-writer-is.. read moreLOL - sure, now you have very nicely cleared that it's not the "writer-ish" Jacob but "non-writer-ish" one, of course, a beloved one of yours :P
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