Hells' Wrath

I wrote this at a time when I was in an abusive relationship....

There's a proper time for pointing a finger, as well as for placing the blame. Feelings now spewing beyond the surface, due to fulfillment of promises that never came.
You dismissed your word to change, to love and always give. Instead it's been replaced with spite and our love now ceases to live.
Muscles tensing, uncontrollable shaking, my heart begins to race. I hear voices speaking to me loudly, delivering warning to firmly brace.
Hells' wrath approaching fiercely, slinging viscious tide. I've no place to safely escape, not even a corner to hide.
Anger released in violence, intensity beyond profound. My eyes are tightly shut and I make not a single sound.
Hell hath arrived earlier, than my misjudged guess at first- a bead of sweat from above falls onto my face, as I prepare myself for the worst....

Reviews

[C. Lee Battaglia]

I struggle with Anxiety and depression. It sucks sometimes but the cure that I've found is to write! It's the most joyful thing that I do. Just write! It will take away those pains and hardships. I would also like to say that you have real potential in your writing and I am Genuinely surprised how amazing your writing style is! It was fantastic and I just wanted to let you know that you could even one day be a published author/writer if you wanted to! Keep smiling, keep writing, and most importantly. be you! You have a talent and this is a talent that all people should see and read!
I have a story here about my best friend, you don't have to read it if you don't want to, but I felt like I should share it with you. :)

Your friend,

C. Lee Battaglia

http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/chasebattaglia/1445363/

[KateH038]

Thank you so very much for reading my poem and thank you more for leaving such a sweet comment! I too, struggle with anxiety and depression and yes, it does suck horribly but I'm still here and I know I haven't made it this far for no reason. So, I'll keep pushing and I hope you do as well! We seem to share the same reason for which we write. Interesting. I would love to read your story and thank you so much for sharing it with me!

[C. Lee Battaglia]

You are very welcome! And yes I would feel free to read your some more of your writings also!

[KateH038]

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[Matthew Kult]

Violently prepared

Great Read

Matthew

So I am about to tackle this subject matter myself. I, however, am neither an abuser nor been abused. I have this method where I place myself in these situations...no I wont be in my house beating the hell out of myself but I will play the imagery in my own head over and over to simulate what the emotions and feeling will be. Its complicated, a bit maniacal, yet accurate. Thus far anyway, but its always great to have references perhaps even research we'll call it. So thank you for writing such a personal piece. I do hope I come somewhere close to imitating this raw emotional charge.

Always,

Matthew

[KateH038]

Very descriptive and accurate, yes.....you pretty much hit the nail on the head, fellow writer. I'm greatly appreciative of your reading as well as your reviewing this piece!!

[Matthew Kult]

You are most welcome. An please, call me Matthew or any of three names I use.

Always,

Matthew

[KateH038]

I sure will, Matthew and again, thank you so very much!