Untitled Kyrielle

I am just now learning how to write more than just free verse. I believe this one is called a Kyrielle and I probably failed at it. Just letting you know.

Sometimes I ask

What I've done wrong

I can't keep on task

I wait for the darkness to shade the gray

Some days I am laughing

Like a meth addict spun

Wondering who will be staffing

I wait for the darkness to shade the gray

I am loving crystals in your smile

The snow flies on the ski run

I'll remember once in a while

I wait for the darkness to shade the gray

With endings going and coming

The last on the list

No room for a pun

I wonder who I am becoming

I wait for the darkness to shade the gray

The lights, so forthcoming

Watch me now, I'll come undone

Waiting for the kiss so stunning

I wait for the darkness to shade the gray

Author's Note

don't be too harsh, I'm very new at this :)

Reviews

[Nwanna Onyeka Benedict]

it is a nice poem. keep it up.