UNIVERSE

STARS I PRAY

MY ALL TO THE UNIVERSE I LAY

GALAXIES I CARRY

ON EARTH I NEED TO REST

THESE COSMOS GOT A HOLD OF ME

ASTEROIDS WANT TO DESTROY EVERYTHING

BEING BURNED BY THOUSAND SUNS

SPACE-TIME IS RUNNING OUT

QUASARS ARE TOO STRONG

WE HAVE TO ANNIHILATE

LIKE MATTER AND ANTI-MATTER

DON'T GET CAUGHT UP WITH GRAVITY WAVES

LIGO AND LISA WILL DETECT

GALACTIC CANNIBALISM IS SEARCHING

ANDROMEDA WANTS A PIECE OF OUR ACTION

3 BILLION YEARS TILL THAT HAPPENS

SUPERNOVA WHEN THEIR MAD

BIG BANG OUT

I'LL BRING YOU DOWN

COMETS FLY BY

VISIBLE TO THE EYE

BLACK HOLE LETS UP ON NOTHING

NOT EVEN LIGHT

Reviews

[Trigorin]

Not bad. I think you might clutter this just a tad too much with all the references you throw in instead of just picking a few and working on those more deeply, but you still get your message across and you do present a very vivid image here. Well done.

[Khalifah]

YES IT WAS MEANT TO FEEL CONFUSING BECAUSE WHEN YOU HAVE THOUGHTS THEY ARE OF EVERYTHING YOU CAN TINK OF_RELATED OR NOT. BUT I USUALLY RAMBLE ON AND CONFUSE MYSELF..
THANK YOU :)