Show me your heart

Jesus Musik

 

“Life is good, at least for me” I say to myself as I sit under a tree

thinking about how good I have it, and how it all came to be

My Bible in my hand, kids playin wit da sand, I flip open a page and see blood on his hand

I see a cross being lifted up, and jesus there with no fear just a face of love

and I hear Mary crying, even though its for the good of man kind,

but who wouldnt cry especially if your son was dying

I see people around starring, lookin at him

watching his pain as he stares back at them, he's givin his love before he leaves

he's got three days so watch carefully.

He will be back to judge the living and the dead, so live your life good and share some bread

im trying my best to be like him, its a struggle ofcourse, but its worth the risk

id give it all up just to see your face, see heaven in the clouds, time and space

God is 3-father, son holy spirit, but hes more than three, cuz hes in you and in me

hes in all of us, the body of christ, show him some love and show him the right

go to confession and clear your soul, be pure and be saved get out of the black hole.

Show me your heart jesus and I swear on my name, I'll love you forever and account for my blame.

Sitting in my bed saying my evening prayer, asking the lord “how do I get there?”

Theres no response, so I go to sleep

In my dreams I hear a silent peap, just some pictures in my mind as the night proceeds

I see Jesus walkin through a town, people looking and crowding around

He says “leave your stuff and follow me” and some will go, but some will leave

the town clears and I see myself, two choices occur, follow-or go to hell.

And im stuck making a choice, I see all the pleasures and sins, and then I see rejoice

what do I do, it should be simple but why cant I move, my legs are stuck and cant find a groove

I struggle to move and choose a side, then I see the devil with his firey eyes

he puts his hand out towards me, but I try to get away and my legs break free

I run to jesus and hold him in my arms, I wake up and realize I'm in charge

theres nothing I cant do with God in my life, so I can sleep well and not have to fight.

He will be back to judge the living and the dead, so live your life good and share some bread

im trying my best to be like him, its a struggle ofcourse, but its worth the risk

id give it all up just to see your face, see heaven in the clouds, time and space

God is 3-father, son holy spirit, but hes more than three, cuz hes in you and in me

hes in all of us, the body of christ, show him some love and show him the right

go to confession and clear your soul, be pure and be saved get out of the black hole.

Show me your heart jesus and I swear on my name, I'll love you forever and account for my blame.

Reviews

[Khalidak]

Nisha your like the best critic! haha thanks

[Nish Nish the Fish]

I think it's incredible when someone is so passionate about something like religion, even if I'm not myself, I get inspired when other people devote their beliefs in such a committed way. I see the strong beliefs you have in this piece and you have done a really good job showing them. I like how you started out with a scenario, you sitting under a tree, and then going off, branching into your heart, talking about what you see in the bible and what it means to you. and then i especially like that you wrote about conflict, the devil, and talked about how handle conflicts, by turning to Jesus. I think its great that you have a role model that you're so passionate about and whom you look up to.
You have a great sense of rhythm and that helps create power in your poem, because when i read it, im not just reading the sentences, im reading them with a beat, and its almost like reading a blaring violin - i love the way a violin sounds.
well done eli :) keep writing and sharing with people!