Love

I think i'm in love, but how can that be, I dont know her and she dont know me, but i get this feeling when i look in her eyes, that makes the sky look red and my heart feel wide, I cant explain but i can feel it, if she only felt it, i could reveal it.

Love is love, thats all there is, you cant deny it, you can just give it a kiss. The world is a playground for lovers like me, but is it only me that can see? I dont know but ill keep lookin, until i find my love and we'll be together now, and even above the clouds when it comes our day, to be with God and finally say, Thank you.

I think i'm in love, but how can that be, I dont know her and she dont know me, but i get this feeling when i look in her eyes, that makes the sky look red and my heart feel wide, I cant explain but i can feel it, if she only felt it, i could reveal it.

I havent found love incase you didnt know, but i'll always be lookin, even in the snow. It can be anywhere and everywhere, its uncontrolable and sometimes even unfair, but until the day i know how it feels, i'll be wondering, over all the years.

I think i'm in love, but how can that be, I dont know her and she dont know me, but i get this feeling when i look in her eyes, that makes the sky look red and my heart feel wide, I cant explain but i can feel it, if she only felt it, i could reveal it.

If i had love, id treat it with care, and i wont ever dare, do anything to ruin the love, id rather die than have her heart broken up. My feelings control my words and even if she says no, i'll still love her, so say no if you wish but dont forget, that those funny fish, like me, dont take the bate and leave so easily.

Reviews

[.abigail.]

i like it! the rhyming suits it really well too. but maybe you could edit it so it's in traditional poetry form, like this:

I think i'm in love, but how can that be,
I dont know her and she dont know me,
but i get this feeling when i look in her eyes,
that makes the sky look red and my heart feel wide,
I cant explain but i can feel it,
if she only felt it, i could reveal it.

[Sinny]

This was very good. You have a calling

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Wow .. really good rhythm.. this could definitely be a song of sorts.. really great flow.. full of emotions pouring from your heart.. you think you are in love with someone that you think doesn't love you back.. love can be on many levels.. you can love someone's heart or soul or even the things around us in life if you are a profoundly sensitive and unique individual.. I love the sun, moon and stars .. yet I can not touch them.. know them only by sight!!! This was written by a very caring and deep individual.. inside pouring out!!! =)

[Saurin Corvinus]

Great rhythm with also a very distinct emotional tone.

[Jwana Creer Yeshua]

I like this it has very good rhythm to it. This poem shows a lot of the person you are. You seem sweet and caring. Thanks for sharing.

Humbly,
Jwana Creer Yeshua

[Jason]

Very good rhythm....and very well worded. I like it. You really put your soul into this, and it shows.