Khaled Hishma Poetry: Aroma

Your aroma a realm...
Sweeter than the roses aroma...
A unique perfume...
Emanates in the whole place.
Your spirit is a spell...
More beautiful than an ample space...
Sealing the emptiness with a flavor...
Prevailing in time.
Your scent is a grandeur...
Majestic... Exquisite... Filling land...
Invading heart regions...
Dazzling the human.
Your geniality a beauty...
As a crisp enchanting basil...
Dwelling the memory...
Foiling oblivion.
Your taste is delightful...
A peerless delicious savor...
Challenging honey...
And heavens fruits.
Your ardent love is a charm...
As a prodigy enthralling the soul...
Infiltrating in the corners...
Of veins and arteries.
A divine painting you are...
Molded by the Maker the Creator...
Quenching the longing of the lover...
And the thirst of the thirsty.
O, a wrapped up rarity...
With the coddle of...
The blossoms and the violets...
And an eternal silver leaves...
Of love and affection.
How beautiful it is...
To enter into...
Your velvety world...
Made with joy,smiles,and safety.
How marvelous is the dwelling...
In your ageless time...
Blended with charmed...
Prairies and groves.
                          Khaled Hishma

Reviews

[MOON]

Aroma beautiful sentiments like scent evoking taste smell and a time . Lovely flow and word choice.

[John]

A poem celebrating a person but also the smells and images that he or she evokes. The three dots that are used extensively throughout this piece allow the reader to interpose their own thoughts, becoming less passive and more an active participator in the creation of the poem.

[Khaled Hishma]

Thank you for such an informative comment.I try always to use the dots in order to get the reader a pose and do imagine and create his/her own pictures of what the poem is saying,and as you said become participants in the imagery.Thank again for your comment.

[John Phoenix Hutchinson..]

Great piece and am very surprised it hasnt had many reviews.

Come on people!! Dont be shy.....we need more positive poetry!

[Khaled Hishma]

thank you and appreciate the invite for review

[Brittany]

This made my mouth water. Exquisite words here to describes something many people over look. Very well done.

[Khaled Hishma]

Thank you Paige,and I do appreciate the reading