My Friend

A true friend, not a fake genre' kind, or Nazi como kazi kind.

Lets go play

I can't my mom said no

But you said...

Sorry man... got to go home

Author's Note

Everyone has gone through this or they are a dweeb./ It wasn't me saying no, it was my parents not allowing me to play with my friends.

Reviews

[Livana Lowell]

It's so short and can mean a lot of things. So I had to read it twice to understand a little more.

Anywyas, yeah, this poem reminds me about my sucky life. My grandmother won't let me hang out with my friends at all so yeah, can relate a lot.

Nice job.

[Honeypot]

For some reason this reminds me of when I was in highschool. I was very good friends with a girl that my dad hated and wouldn't even let me talk to on the phone. Nice job on the poem. Its the kind that can mean many different things to the reader.

[Lizanne]

Good on fact, short and to the point. I like the tell it like it is attitude. A true friend, just held under the parents restraints.