Out My Back Window

An indepth look, into a world gone wrong.

Stare blindly into your last thoughts,

Window shades drawn,

day and night,

Opening them to see the world,

I feel the discontent of a place I don't want to be,

Love is the answer,

It doesn't matter if you are black or white,

Whoever you are,

You'll Shine,

So Smile with delight!

As I look out my back window,

I see the stars,

People who pretend and create problems,

With all of what I see,

I know there will be a re-birth,

Love and Liberty.

Reviews

[Ama May Cooper]

A exciting flow that seems to tingle as you read it i have nothing more to say that beautiful

[Livana Lowell]

I like how it flows. It starts off hopless and stating the bad and then it goes down to making the reader feel hopeful and look forward to a better piece of the world.

Yes, it's short. It's short, but it's long with passion and feeling and I like that.:).

Good Job!

[fauxcajun]

I hope you are prophetic, my friend, because the world is NOT a very nice place these days / Well written / Professionally delivered . . .

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Outside our own little world lies danger so being in the shelter of love is needed... very well said.

[Morning]

this is great.
your writing, I think, is so emotional
I love it.
Check mine out! =]