Spinning in Circles

Spinning in Circles

A Poem by Kathryn Star, Shine!
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when you've had enough and your eyes bleed after editing 267 pages of your book, line by line...

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Drive, drove, rode,

Donned, donned, donned,

Repeating, repitious, cloned,

Words tell the story,

While the crazy, look for meaning,

Editing is completely insane!

The End

© 2009 Kathryn Star, Shine!


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Kathryn Star, Shine!
Just had to get it off my mind!

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So true so true... all the words start to blend and you read it how you thought you wrote it makes it hard to edit... your poem says it all.

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I am doing the same with my book so you have my sympathy. :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

At least it seems you are finished writing your book. Is this the mystery I read some of two or three years ago?

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 19, 2009

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Kathryn Star, Shine!
Kathryn Star, Shine!

Somewhere between Heaven and Hell, can you tell me?



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I write novels as a profession. I am not a poet. All my poetry is just my thoughts and I don't profess to be anything but a beginner. I hate drama, I love the beach, hiking and camping. I love frie.. more..

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