Sick

Just read and you'll see

Digest the words of a man famished  
You can’t digest these lyrics, to disgusting for one’s bowels  to manage
I’m pissed in more ways than one
I say men don’t kill ,it comes down to that gun
Watch me pull the trigger leaving guts on this manuscript!
They say I went to far, I pulled him  from reality’s grip
“ Funny: I guess my finger slipped”
I just murdered ignorance…………….  
“If I don’t who will make that difference”

They say “no matter the reason, killing is killing”
“I’m just weeding through artificial trying to find the real thing
The sky is the limit, stop reaching for the ceiling!”

I say one less man won’t be missed
“You will die happy, for ignorance is bliss”
I’m sorry it had to come to this

I just murdered stupidity…………..
“Close your eyes and think so you CAN really see!”

“Your words are Laxatives, You excrete Profanity
So you must die for the sake of humanity”

BANG!

I just murdered Profanity …………

And for those who don’t know Profanity’s definition
It’s a word or phrase that shows disrespect for God, or religion

Ignorance wastes time, times only for the living
So if I have to, I will do all the killing

“Do I seem sick to u?”
I am sick of this………………..

Kevon Crute

 

Author's Note

Tell me what u honestly think

Reviews

[Silent Kim aka mizmetap..]

Nicely written, it would serve nicely as a spoken word piece.

Thanks for your entry in my contest and the best of luck.

[Cece]

Cliches Cliches Cliches
you killin Cliches
i disagree wit you first
but realize you being
contrary such as
guns kill not peeps

humanity will most surety
be much worst off if you die
but yes to you can see better
if you close your eyes

illusions can be blinding
digesting can create starvation
all so contrary such as metaphor cause
all such to make a peep think wtf lol

[Nely Amorim]

it's definately a unique piece and your style is something i haven't come across before but i found it refreshing and honest. great read:)

[Wildfleour]

Kevon - Although our styles are so different, I completely appreciate yours. You have a great raw edge.

[DiamondNRough AKA Patty..]

WOW... I don't think you're sick, it's reality that is sick! Great Write!

[EMP]

this was such a good poem. i mean yes, it was quite scary and it's hard to think of that as a truth but it obviously happens in the world and you put it in such great words! i really enjoyed reading it! i'm looking forward to reading some more of your work! well done :)

[Jo Todd]

I liked it. It was kind of scary, but I understand the feeling of wanting to rid the world of ignorance. I live in the central U.S. and it's rampant here.