Ashes to Ashes

1st of three parts........explains me kinda

I've been through so much this year,only the lord knows
I'm just a boxer taking the worlds blows
Human Punching bag that's losing it's sand
I can't measure up to all the worlds demands
I guess theres no ruler required for me
I stare at the sun so I won’t see
Me giving up, no that won’t be
.........................Me
So confused, I'm not meeting ends
And alot of my friends are satan’s friends
What they call harmless fun. I call playful sins
So.....I will dropped them like flys
So tears.....I won't cry
(sigh).he he
No...no. That won't be me
Breathing with lungs in a dangerous sea
I'm as dead serious as a coffin
Because thoughts like these come by often
I'm in the Sahara with no eyes
I'm trying to hear the truth and no lies
Like a biased ear
But problems still linger near
I'm STILL hoping people are more than their diction
Tryna depict fact from fiction
Trying not to tap out to a move that's submission
That is my mission
To be persistent and not to give up............
Hopefully I can live up
to my future's plans
But I leave it in God's reliable hands
I'm planted deep in the ground
I feeling quite helpless now
I want to fly with the birds
I want not to find lies in words
I want to live
I want to give
But people are talk no listen
One of my ideas of the definition of Contradiction
No Longer Shall I trail on broken wings
I will be that caged bird who sings
The the the the cage is open
The Age of the Fake Sage is broken
Right now I'm kissing sad
And if my dreams aren't alive,then I'm the Living DEAD
I now have dead ears
No more shed Tears
I am The Phoenix

 

Author's Note

I don't really care about grammar..... I just want to know what you think

Reviews

[Riverdance]

Strong emotions and descriptions. The flow is a little off...but I like your ideas!

Thanks for entering in the Move Me contest!

~Rd

[Wildfleour]

And like the Phoenix, we rise from the ashes!!!!!!!!!!

It's got a good rhythm to it...