Postmodern

4-9-2007 [EAPS]

 

Postmodern?

 

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Kevin M. Reader

Reviews

[Raef C. Boylan]

So both the narrator and the blue frog are talking frogs and don't know? That's what i got from this anyway...i found it funny and clever.
I think this might be the best piece of yours that i've read so far; it flows well, uses some great descriptive imagery (e.g. "born from a sheet of artic ice") and the story has (i think) an interesting twist.
Enjoyed reading this a lot.
"the bluest frog you�ve ever seen" - should 'the' be capitalized, or should there be a semi-colon/similar at the end of "on the petal"?
Thanks for sharing this, Kevin. Good piece of poetry.

[alesuriko]

Interesting new approach but I'm sorry, I don't consider this poetry. You just simply stated that it was something and rearranged things in a pretty pattern to say two things in two different colors. In my opinion it's not postmodern or poetry. You can call it art if you want, people call almost anything art nowadays. I'm sorry if my review offended you but basically, with stuff like this you should anticipate that not everyone will agree with your own opinions and consider this art. Which in turn makes it art, funny how that works huh? Nonetheless, you lack creativity with this "piece."

[Mannix]

Your stories are very poetic and very odd in an intriguing way. I will definitely come back to read more. I can tell you had fun writing this.

[Contessa Nite]

You have once again done excellent job! It was very amusing and enjoying to read. It also helped brighten my day lots.

[Jillian Ashe]

LOL! Awesome ending and I loved the description, gorgeous!

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

I liked this , very imiginative and interesting, beautiful descriptive words. Good job.


Peace

[Crap!]

Pol the polliwog is now Paul the frog and blue from artic ice, swimfinly nice!

[Katie Lynn]

glad you sent this to me. its unique and I know your book will be a success

[Jillian Alexis (has bee..]

this is good...i really love the description of the frog... tell me tho..is there a certain meaning behind it? maybe im just being blind

[Bubo]

Ha.......this is wonderful
i had to read it twice as I was convinced it was the frog and then its a man!Ha........or is it the other way around!
Lovely!