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5.8.2007 (3) [FAR]

 

Caged primal animals

building our own limitation.

 

Protecting ourselves from living.

 

Just out of our reach

is the original

the unsinned natured

our toxic breaths

have created an eastward wind

pushing us away

from the setting sun

 

will it bring us to a new day?

 

 

 

 

Kevin M. Reader

 

Reviews

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

I don't think the new day if brought , will be pleasant..The image of the falling leaf makes me think this as well as many other things.
Very good.

Peace

Chloe

[Bubo]

I'm intrigued...........unsinned natured...........toxic breaths, all from a fallen leaf.
New life.........falling leafs, and being pushed into a world where green is stripped down, away, until nothing is left.
We are all animals..........
I was abit confused, maybe the title throws me off.