The Moments of Your Life.

5.13.2007 (2) [Café Kopi]

 

The Moments of Your Life.

 

 

birth

 

                        [insert your moments here] 

 

 

                                                                                    death

 

 

 

 

 

 

Kevin M. Reader

Reviews

[Vanessa]

This is a simplistic and wonderful piece of work. It's clever and it makes the reader truely think, reflect and imagine. Birth and death are both such significant events in our lives, filling us with emotions that are almost unexplainable and/or beyond description. However, each word alone conveys what cannot be said and we all understand. Great work!

[Contessa Nite]

Interesting to read :) It sure made me think! Its pretty coll how u can get your meaning across with so few words. Feel free to send anything else my way.

[Raef C. Boylan]

Wow - you made us all work for the result! Impressive.
The only two events that all humans experience without exception (disregarding the possibilty of immortality)...everything else is up to you.
Clever job.
Thanks for sharing.

[Jennifer]

Wow. That certainly gives me a lot to think about. I think this was very cool. And here I was thinking I hadn't lived or had anything to show for my life, but thinking about it now-there has been so much more than I ever imagined. Thanks for making me see things a little differently.

[O!]

You are a clever young man..........very very clever......you flow when u have to and now u just say alot (through our thoughts inserted) with a few words!!!

I love ur creative side here!! :-)

O! :-)

[Mannix]

Haha clever man, I like this. I have something called Duration thats kind of similar to this. But this is short, yet it still conveys the same message. Good work. I'll read some of your other stuff later, but I have to go out to school now.

[Jeff "jazzman"..]

Very clever Kevin, you have tapped into the minds of everyone that reads this...outstanding work!

[Bubo]

Now that opens up a whole new world and meaning...........and I just sit here thinking of all the inserts!
Given me something to think about!
Intriguing!

[Katie Lynn]

dude, thats just classic... totally like my spin on the love poems, only yours is cool and makes the point a little more clear

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Wow , very innovative ..Also makes you think and remember time is not that long when all is said and done.
Loved it.

Peace