9.10.2008 (1) the bang theory / a love eclipse

9.10.2008 (1)

 

the bang theory / a love eclipse

and in that moment we were afraid

afraid to move

afraid to speak

 

our eyes had glossed over

as we were both paralyzed

by each other's gaze

 

in that safety we were free

in that one moment we were in love

and we knew that it could not be forever

 

but for that moment

love existed unlike nothing else

 

it was shared

reciprocapted

and real

 

there was a coexistence

and two worlds met,

collided

a lapse

a frozen moment

 

Then sound came back to the world.

 

 

kevin m. reader

Reviews

[Brianna Brie]

there was a coexistence
and two worlds met,
collided
a lapse
a frozen moment

Great job! Creative, expressive and explosive...the ending leaves a sad impression that reality found its way back into the hearts and minds of the ones involved. Love being no longer blind. Thanks for entering this poem into the "In My Lover's Words" contest.

Then sound came back to the world.

[Bubo]

I just love the sentiment of this, especially today with the huge experiment beginning in Switzerland (I think), and love is just like a big bang, that moment of nothing but living, breathing that moment, you're last ine just made me smile............beautifully romantic.