Out

1.8.2008 Out

It seems so simple at first.

Another forlorn story about a girl and a guy missing out,
missing someone
but you’re missing the point.

You are a strong piece,
this is about calling,
calling out.

This is about reaching,
reaching out.

Not putting up with ,
but putting out,
putting yourself out;

out there,
just one more time,
for a change.

Just one more time,
for a chance.
 

Reviews

[Darkhand]

What a thoughtful, provacative story. It reminded me so much about the loves of my life, and how so many of them didn't work out.