You and I

You and I

A Poem by KevinKevz
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PERFECT, is not when two people are together. It's when you're both different but in a way, you complete each other. -heymissawesome.tumblr

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I am a poison and you are my cure

Knowing my sting lasts but your heart is pure.

These wounds within that only you can heal

You’re my remedy and my happy pill.

 

I am sunshine mixed with a hurricane

But you can calm my storm and take this pain

When I can’t move mountains and I fell down

You came tumbling after and fix my crown.

 

I am nothing but unlovable mess

While you’re enchanting and born to impress

Despite of my flaws and imperfection

You embraced them all with your devotion.

 

I am forever yours and you are mine

We will face side by side what’s on the line

Our differences can’t conquer us

You can feel my love that I don’t discuss.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

© 2019 KevinKevz


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This is a great love poem (and I'm not even a fan of them). I like it becuz it doesn't sound like the usual predictable romantic rubbish. You present a unique point of view & then fill it in fully to paint a realistic word picture of how relationships are often one person feeling broken & another person helping him/her get thru the toughness of healing. I love that this sounds like a balanced relationship of support, not a codependent kind of "help me, save me from myself" kind of sickness. This sounds like the narrator is being overly modest . . . he's probably not as tarnished as he presents himself . . . but more just wanting to put his partner on a pedestal with his adoration (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 4 Years Ago


Wah ang danda po,, :) :)

Posted 4 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

KevinKevz

4 Years Ago

Thank you Shineheemi
Shineheemi

4 Years Ago

You’re welcome

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Added on August 20, 2019
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Manila, NCR, Philippines



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