We Take Turns

Brown and Green lock
They are earthy colors,
And how fitting, for this is Nature's
Oldest gift.

Life is only a shell without the link
The string that ties living and dying,
And draws purity from sinful humanity's
Restless reap.

Reviews

[Sasha]

This poem is well-written and eloquent sounding.. For me though, it's very vague. I can barely comprehend what's going on in the first stanza and have NO IDEA how it's linked to the second. The second was easier for me to understand and I liked the way you expressed the views contained therein.

[Natasha]

Haha, I love the caption underneath the title.
Aside from that, this poem is good.
Dare I say it? Really good.

I must say, nice with the vague and subtle.
You truly are a master, sir. =]