Riot!

dnt know exactly wat its about...but hey, tell me if you like it.

Lets fingerpaint the sky with our enemies blood. Dance on the graves of those who broke our hearts. Scream in the face of those who attempt to stop us. Stomp on the feet of the ones that marched against us. Break the bones of those who let us down. Crush the spirits of the ones who have supressed us. And drive a steak through the hearts that beat against ours. Let our laughter fill the silence as our enemies blood rains from the skies. Laugh in the face of their cries for mercy. Lets be the dark ones we're known to be. Fullfill the dark deeds set in stone. Lets RIOT!

Author's Note

let me know what you think. i.e. what u like -or dislike :( - , how did it make you feel, etc.

Reviews

[bre]

Let me just say, I am absolutely in love with your writing, I think this is my fourth time reviewing your work, and this is my first time ever subscribing to a writer!

I like that this isn't in like a formate, it looks like you just sat down and spilled whatever you were thinking. it gives me a "raw" feeling, very real. nice write. I hope you give me something else to read soon =]

peace of bre

[Str8jacket]

I love it! Does this make me mentally disturbed? Meh, probably so. This made me feel very rebellious. It's almost like you captured the spirit of anarchy, the "in your face" attitude of the repressed. It's also weirdly uplifting to me, almost like the ones who put you down don't matter. It paints this really cool picture in my head, too! Good job!!