Fake

Bow for the blow

bow to the ax

bow your head in sleep.

Go to sleep and never wake from this toxic world that's all too fake.

Something,something strange brewing in the darkness. Are you ready for the change?

Freaks that shreek  in this black and white world that's all too bleak.

I name you fake

hiding behind a pretty face.

A mask of darkness brewing behind those eyes.

Covered by a mask, some makeup and your lies. 

Who are you when i strip away your face?

A mock, a clown, or a mimic in a dangerous place.

Feast on the pain. Feast on the sorrow.

Feast  on the poor mans riches and you'll end up swimming with the fishes. 

As night drapes it's cool dark capes.

Out comes the full moons glare. 

Out comes the werewolf hidden beyond your stair.  

Reviews

[John Cardwell]

Wonderful poem TDH! The dark imagery, the rich metaphor combine wonderfully to convey the mood - Anger. Thanks for sharing. Have a nice day!

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

"night drapes it's cool dark capes.
Out comes the full moons glare," I liked this line. Powerful write. Tyfs

[Mauricio Montoya]

man ur danger with a hate explore or imploded nevertheless avoid.

[The dark Hydra]

We have a mother f*****g bingo on our hands, let's see how long it takes for him to realize this is just garbage and the others are pure platinum

[LazerRays]

Very good my friend; I love it

[Onlyme]

Prefered this one. More context and point to this one. Good detail, interesting and heartfelt. Bravo on this one. See you if you took it seriously instead of taking the piss you would shine.

[IWAZHERE]

There's definitely power behind this. It's got intensity that's driven home by the last line. Though I think you mean “stare” not “stair”. Also “shriek” not “shreek”.
Though in my opinion some of it's power gets loss in the over usage of a few words like the double usage of “fake” and “face”. Also if your going to repeat “behind” in those two lines, I suggest making it more intentionally parallel. Like with “bow” in the first three lines.
The last three lines crown this perfectly, and your choice of format I think is interesting and effective.

[The dark Hydra]

Fake was my attempt to wright a real peace.

[IWAZHERE]

I would say you scored a good piece.

[The dark Hydra]

Yeah, I just write what ever happens to be on my mind that day.