If you ask me,(yes, I know ye didn't but I'm gonna tell ye anyway...if anyone TRIES TO read this,there is somethin' wrong with 'em. Could it be that the person who WROTE this is a...well, you know...and I agree, we ARE ALL a******s living in a bad world;you included, my little fartblossom!
Nice to meet you, Dark Hydra.my dear fellow s**t person!
you know I take back what I said I am a s**t person. we live in a s**t world. But how to fix that wo.. read moreyou know I take back what I said I am a s**t person. we live in a s**t world. But how to fix that world is the question.
6 Years Ago
Environmental warfare. I was an environmental warrior for years; before the wheelchair impeded my ac.. read moreEnvironmental warfare. I was an environmental warrior for years; before the wheelchair impeded my activities. Can't afford a car, and can't hitchhike...
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yeah, people or so focused on finding intelligent life on other planets we forget to look for intell.. read moreyeah, people or so focused on finding intelligent life on other planets we forget to look for intelligent life on this one. Oh well, the aliens are smart enough to stay away from us.
If you ask me,(yes, I know ye didn't but I'm gonna tell ye anyway...if anyone TRIES TO read this,there is somethin' wrong with 'em. Could it be that the person who WROTE this is a...well, you know...and I agree, we ARE ALL a******s living in a bad world;you included, my little fartblossom!
Nice to meet you, Dark Hydra.my dear fellow s**t person!
you know I take back what I said I am a s**t person. we live in a s**t world. But how to fix that wo.. read moreyou know I take back what I said I am a s**t person. we live in a s**t world. But how to fix that world is the question.
6 Years Ago
Environmental warfare. I was an environmental warrior for years; before the wheelchair impeded my ac.. read moreEnvironmental warfare. I was an environmental warrior for years; before the wheelchair impeded my activities. Can't afford a car, and can't hitchhike...
6 Years Ago
yeah, people or so focused on finding intelligent life on other planets we forget to look for intell.. read moreyeah, people or so focused on finding intelligent life on other planets we forget to look for intelligent life on this one. Oh well, the aliens are smart enough to stay away from us.
Well, when your staring at a white wall all day you invent ways to entertain yourself so you don't g.. read moreWell, when your staring at a white wall all day you invent ways to entertain yourself so you don't go crazy
this poem flows very well! the words all blend together for a perfect "kdhfksdjhfdkjsfhs"
beautiful! You have a brilliant mind! im looking forward to more of these intricate poems. such grace!
Posted 6 Years Ago
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6 Years Ago
Wow. Looks like im a s**t person- nothing new there
6 Years Ago
Yes, but arguably the most striking phrase here is the exquisitely vivid "ojdishfuidhfsnfjdshfsmds"... read moreYes, but arguably the most striking phrase here is the exquisitely vivid "ojdishfuidhfsnfjdshfsmds". That may just be artistic interpretation, though.
6 Years Ago
i have to agree- it also emphasizes the use of your "aihflfhdfhds" its perfect!!!
6 Years Ago
wow I usually laugh at nothing but this is making me laugh harder.
6 Years Ago
Look out, man, if they hear ye larfin', they'll up yer meds...or is that the hope? Oh, and I loved i.. read moreLook out, man, if they hear ye larfin', they'll up yer meds...or is that the hope? Oh, and I loved it when ye said,"aihflfhdfhds". That was simply inspired!
6 Years Ago
Oh, and Sarah...you stole my line! I was gonna say that about this masterpiece poem. It's making me .. read moreOh, and Sarah...you stole my line! I was gonna say that about this masterpiece poem. It's making me positively pea green with envy!
6 Years Ago
I'm sorry. It's just hard to ignore this wonderful poem. Don't you agree that the line "hdjfkakfkwk".. read moreI'm sorry. It's just hard to ignore this wonderful poem. Don't you agree that the line "hdjfkakfkwk" flatters his "djfjajrndjw"?
Such talent! And I thought that Edgar Allan Poe was good. But here comes the new Emily Dickinson! "fnsfnwjsjf" so goood! Love this!
6 Years Ago
Well, Emily Dick, and then some.
6 Years Ago
However, I am most partial to the phrase dahgfuihsd cudhu dfdush d dssdhsd d usdhidsa
sjuihfd.. read moreHowever, I am most partial to the phrase dahgfuihsd cudhu dfdush d dssdhsd d usdhidsa
sjuihfdshfjsdhfuihfdsuhfdsh sdhusidhfjfdsjhfdsjkfdsjfjsh sdjbdhgfuifgdsxjfdsjdgsgf
6 Years Ago
Did you not find it...mellifluous?
6 Years Ago
Oh it was! It was perfect! And that one part "djxkajtbfjsoajtngdkafkf"? That really made me ponder a.. read moreOh it was! It was perfect! And that one part "djxkajtbfjsoajtngdkafkf"? That really made me ponder about life.
6 Years Ago
Oh, yes...and juxtaposed with "kdhfksdjhfdkjsfhs",it even touches upon the theme of death...I can't .. read moreOh, yes...and juxtaposed with "kdhfksdjhfdkjsfhs",it even touches upon the theme of death...I can't imagine this being said any better. I bow to the sovereign of all poets!!
6 Years Ago
It's like all the human emotions in one. I cried, laughed, even screamed in terror! Even now, I'm fa.. read moreIt's like all the human emotions in one. I cried, laughed, even screamed in terror! Even now, I'm failing to hold back tears as I read the "rjsjgnskfigjsn"
oh... The tears are spilling all over my iPod now... WHO IS THIS MAN???? HE MUST BE AN ANGEL! APOLLO! GREEK GOD OF POETS!!!
6 Years Ago
Ah, the rest of us might as well just give up...it's impossible to compete with this genius. Well, I.. read moreAh, the rest of us might as well just give up...it's impossible to compete with this genius. Well, I'll have a bash...
djuybrmjwsddgrllionhcgetwmxkiasebchdftrhsbxcvz...is that flowing?
Sorry- it's just not as good as his. Try working a bit more on the "fjajf" part. His was more like ".. read moreSorry- it's just not as good as his. Try working a bit more on the "fjajf" part. His was more like "fjaeof"
we might as well give up. We can't compare to Apollo here
6 Years Ago
Yeah, we've given him enough attention, I guess. I'm gonna go now. See ya around, Sarah. We shall ex.. read moreYeah, we've given him enough attention, I guess. I'm gonna go now. See ya around, Sarah. We shall exit backwards, as befits royalty...no, no! Don't show him your a*s! Oh, all right, I'll show him mine, too. Bye, Hydie, old buddy! See ya!