unheard

she stands defeated

as words elude her

his mind was closed

Author's Note

Ketoma - 1/14/2012

Reviews

[Lyn Anderson]

This is great. Says so much with clarity and power.

[Kellyrose]

Thank you for your kind words

[Frieda P]

Succinct, and poignant...so few words with huge impact. Nicely pen'd.

[Kellyrose]

Thank you :)

[Frieda P]

My pleasure, Jack sent me :-)

[Kellyrose]

Jack is pretty wonderful

[Pryde Foltz]

Sometimes there are no words … a wonderful write.

[Kellyrose]

Thank you :)

[Rita L. Sev]

Such a universal frustration - well and succinctly said, Ketoma. The brevity of this piece adds to its impact.

[Kellyrose]

Thank you so much :)

[Gleb Zavlanov]

A very nice piece, rich and lush with detail and sorrow, and finely crafted as well. Bravo!

[Kellyrose]

Thank you for your kind words

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

Indeed, a refining piece that deals well with the reader.

[Kellyrose]

Thank you :)

[Sami Khalil]

"she stands defeated

as words elude her

his mind was closed"
Splendid...:)..........

[Kellyrose]

Thank you :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)..................

[Baby Ricochet]

Don't you just hate it when that happens

[Kellyrose]

Yes, yes I do :)

[Sami Khalil]

Live and learn. touch the fire and burn...A wonderful write...:)..............

[Kellyrose]

Thank you :)

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).................

[Jack...]

This is simply beautiful. So much said in 3 short lines. Welcome to writerscafe.

[Kellyrose]

Thank you again Jack, I see what you mean about the photographs

[Jack...]

No problem my friend. Let me know if there is anything I can do to help you navigate this site.

[Kellyrose]

Thank you Jack