Just one last chance

Just one last chance

A Poem by Ketaki Patwardhan-Nirkhi
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This poem depicts the words of a martyred army man...his words for the love of his life...

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Just One last chance…

Oh God, give me just one last chance, to see her, touch her, feel her,
To fulfill her each desire, and to tell, how much I love her.
I had always dreamt of a life as beautiful as you my dear,
Even when we were separated by distance, you were always so very near
I used to gaze at the stars and keep wondering about thee
Were you too watching them, cuddled in bed, and thinking about me?
The moon always reminded me of your beautiful, spotless face
And I would yearn to come back to you and take you into my embrace
When I saw you the very last time, your eyes full of tears I could see,
But I had to leave my dear, for my land needed me
For all the injuries I sustained, I thought I would live through
For every time a bullet hit my body, I saw only you
Today I have gone so far away; I don’t know what to do
All I can do is look at you from beyond and forever, keep loving you
I had no idea, Oh God, for us you had such plans,
Please, oh please oh God, give me just one last chance.

© 2012 Ketaki Patwardhan-Nirkhi


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sentiments of a soldier far away from home fighting against death. well driven feelings with words.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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Ketaki Patwardhan-Nirkhi
Ketaki Patwardhan-Nirkhi

mumbai, Maharashtra, India



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I am an anesthetist by profession and a writer by passion. "Those enchanted four and half years" is my debut novel. My short stories have featured on sites like induswomanwriting and short story book. more..

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