Such a pretty flower

Such a pretty flower

A Poem by Kerwin
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I love dandelions.......i think they are misunderstood.

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Such a pretty Flower
 

So pretty during the years warmest of season
God created the dandelion for many a reason

This pretty flower is so delicate, slim, and long
Yet it grows up so quick and it is so strong

A reproduction master the dandelion truly is blessed
Blowing its seeds everywhere to which many are
aghast

Its dominant yellows contrast with its greens
While some try to kill it by whatever the means

The companies with their chemicals are out every year
They heed no mind to children or to animals who are
near

A Flower? A Flower? They say to you in jest
But for its beauty and power it is the Best

© 2009 Kerwin


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Wow.. well the dandelion certainly does have it purpose and was placed here for some reason other than just the colour I am sure.. who knows maybe they will find a cure of some sort from this plant.. you never know and then it may become priceless whereby everyone wants them! Stranger things certainly have happened... I like the fact you deal with what is considered a weed.. and turn it into a flower of colour and beauty when it is something that will certainly never completely disappear.. and the chemicals used to destroy it does more harm to people and animals ... we have to ask.. what is more important harming ourselves or ridding something that is merely a nuisance to some? There is wisdom in your writing.. though the reception from others will be one of mixed review as so many do not like this plant! If you look at a field of these though with the sun setting.. the reflection is a sea of gold.. which I do personally think is quite pretty.. thank you for sharing!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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the dandelion is my favorite flower and i love takeing pictures of it loved this poemm so true!



Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Aww, dandelions are definitely misunderstood. Some say it's a flower, and some say it's a weed...I don't really give it much thought.

But, good. :)

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Wow.. well the dandelion certainly does have it purpose and was placed here for some reason other than just the colour I am sure.. who knows maybe they will find a cure of some sort from this plant.. you never know and then it may become priceless whereby everyone wants them! Stranger things certainly have happened... I like the fact you deal with what is considered a weed.. and turn it into a flower of colour and beauty when it is something that will certainly never completely disappear.. and the chemicals used to destroy it does more harm to people and animals ... we have to ask.. what is more important harming ourselves or ridding something that is merely a nuisance to some? There is wisdom in your writing.. though the reception from others will be one of mixed review as so many do not like this plant! If you look at a field of these though with the sun setting.. the reflection is a sea of gold.. which I do personally think is quite pretty.. thank you for sharing!

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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I am a short story writer. I am looking forward to developing my skills in this area. I really like to get into a story...and then share it with others. I hope you enjoy what i come up with. more..

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