My Brain!

Just a quick one.

 

Here is the dichotomy, concerning my lobotomy. I’ve half a mind to go ahead, but the other half is full of dread

Reviews

[Inspiring Writer]

Last two lines're nicely penned, again you did a great job. Our body's working only cause of brain, if our brain's dead, we're dead. Our life's moving and moving only the cause of time cause the time's moving as well. You've well described about this write... in your own few words.
Keep writing.

[Steve]

Thank you! You are very kind.

[Alejandra]

Very straight to the point. Its short and simple. I like it. Nice wording.

[Steve]

Thank you sweet lady. That was kind of you to say.

[Alejandra]

No problem. :)

[written in blood]

straight to the point!!! I love little thoughts!! :p)

[Steve]

You are kind.

[KAREN]

I like the word play in this poem. Nicely done!

[Debbie_Philly]

Short and full of power... great piece !!

[Steve]

thank you my new friend....

[Debbie_Philly]

Your very welcome... and nice to meet you !!

[Helen Crutchett]

A very effective 'quickie'. Really good!

[Liza]

nice quicky - thought provoking and truth fully splashed

[Ashley]

so much in so little

great! 100

[ब्र&#..]

this is very powerful great read!
alltid
-Meja

[Joiedevivre]

short and strong! Like!

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

a nice quickie.......:)