My Brain!

Just a quick one.

 

Here is the dichotomy, concerning my lobotomy. I’ve half a mind to go ahead, but the other half is full of dread

Reviews

[Inspiring Writer]

Last two lines're nicely penned, again you did a great job. Our body's working only cause of brain, if our brain's dead, we're dead. Our life's moving and moving only the cause of time cause the time's moving as well. You've well described about this write... in your own few words.
Keep writing.

[Steve]

Thank you! You are very kind.

[Samantha ~virginpoet]

witty .. and for some reason it made me laugh a little ... well done

[Steve]

Thanks! You are kind!

[Daydreamer]

A witty poetic tribute to becoming an emotionless zombie.
You slay the dragon that would defend your castle or kill Glenda the good witch to save the wicked witch of the west. Better still how about sitting a rusty metal tool shed in the middle of the Taj Mahal's courtyard?
So much destruction to quiet a small nagging that one would desire to divide and conquer the brain.
This work shows how much power can be demonstrated and the amount of thought that can be provoked with a few words. Might we conclude that you wield a talented pen.

[Steve]

Thank you! I appreciate those informed thoughts.

[lee von cleef]

My grandfather would of toasted this poem.He lived life half full,then added more scotch.

[Steve]

This comment made me laugh. Thank you.

[A.E. Surdam]

Short and sweet. Playful and catchy. Thank you for sharing!

[Steve]

I appreciate that! Thanks for reading this silly one.

[Girl Friday (Sarah W.)]

:) Very witty, my friend. On the surface, this seems simple, but yet upon further inspection there is a primal depth to your words and thoughts here. Freedom from a spike in the head...sometimes I could see this being a luxury. Haha

[Steve]

LOL You are funny. Thanks for reading.

[Wórdsmíth]

well. it's a good one man, felt your depth of words...your thoughts.
i think it's an amazin' once write with powerful words.

[revalatia]

awesome... I really dig this!

[Steve]

wow. Thanks!

[Robbie~xoxo~]

Don't we always dread the unthinkable... and yet we do it anyway... Nice quick write! :))

[Steve]

Thank you dear.

[Thomas Fitzgerald]

A to the point reeling sense of what the mind has to offer and the power it pocesses, well done, good read.

[Steve]

Thank you so much~!

[rnuff]

short, simple and the point, enjoyed this