My Brain!

Just a quick one.

 

Here is the dichotomy, concerning my lobotomy. I’ve half a mind to go ahead, but the other half is full of dread

Reviews

[Inspiring Writer]

Last two lines're nicely penned, again you did a great job. Our body's working only cause of brain, if our brain's dead, we're dead. Our life's moving and moving only the cause of time cause the time's moving as well. You've well described about this write... in your own few words.
Keep writing.

[Steve]

Thank you! You are very kind.

[Dye]

So clever. Made me chuckle at the wit behind it.

[Steve]

Thank you Dye! I'm flattered you liked it.

[Dye]

You are very welcome :)

[Jennifer McQueen]

Oh, you're clever. Last two lines were gold. Bravo!

[Steve]

Thank you! You are very kind.

[Traci]

Short but these two words contain much depth. Brilliant write, Steve.
Looking forward to reading more of your work :)

[Poetic Justice]

:) loved it..clever ditty..

[Steve]

Thank you!!

[Selena Chapman]

This one made me laugh, thank you for that! Very witty, enjoyed the rhythm of it. Thank you for sharing.

[Steve]

I'm glad you liked it! Thank you.

[SteveB]

LOL
Bravo! A witty piece showing that sometimes a "quickie" as you termed it is exactly what is needed. Nicely structured.

[Tate Morgan]

That took me by surprise and left me happy inside

[Steve]

Thank you Tate. I'm flattered.

[Tate Morgan]

Nice to meet you I am Tate Morgan welcome to the cafe

[Troy Henson]

mmmmmm.....a conflict within. How true is that the brain can and will attempt to divide and try to conquer.
I found this interseting.
Regards

[Zelle]

this 1 makes u think and den u laugh! i relished it! :)

[Steve]

:0). You are kind. Thank you.